Wednesday, 20 May 2015

on a really rocky cliff some one was lost she was wearing red jeans and sneakers the air tasted like mud.She slipped  but she still carried on after  a lot of weeks or days but she still couldn’t find her way home but she still keeped on climbing on.She                                             was as tied as a sloth walking on the ground
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  1. Anonymous24 May 2015 at 19:48

    I really like how you added senses in the writing and added similes and metaphors.
    :p :)

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  2. Anonymous28 May 2015 at 17:31

    this script of writing is really well sentenced

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